Christy Deveaux

i really wanted to like this story, which had an intriguing premise. however, the story could have used an editor willing to cut perhaps 1/3rd of the total word count, which mostly consisted of "undying love"/"we were meant for each other"/"teenage angst"/"perfect families", ad nauseum, without losing any part of the actual plot. i probably read the last 40-50 pages in just a few minutes, catching the basics of each page without losing any of the plot.