Anna Devereux
Autor/a de The Submissive Husband: The Entire Collection 1-3
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Anna Devereux's Femdom Submission: The Complete Series 1-3: A BDSM, femdom, chastity collection 1 exemplars
Anna Devereux's The English Wife: The Complete Series 1-3: A BDSM, femdom, chastity collection 1 exemplars
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A Cuckold's Journey: The Entire Series 1-3: Femdom… de Anna Devereux
It's a poorly written story by a writer who has good potential actually. Major problem is that it needs heavy proofreading. There are too many spelling mistakes, and the names used are wrong too many times. But what really destroyed the story is that there is way too much maledom/gay stuff for a Femdom story. Just because a story is written on the subject of Cuckold doesn't mean it has to have full focus on bull's interaction with the submale. After all, a story marketed as Femdom has to have more focus on it.… (més)
Weaker characterization got even weaker in this part. And integration of cuckolding further damaged the overall story. Kindly of disappointing ending to a triology that could have become great only if the mistakes of first part were improved in later ones, instead of just following the same flow.
The story has good Femdom scenes. Problem is that exactly same scenes have already been used in other stories of Anna. And like other stories, this one also have poor characterization. But unlike some others, this one has lot weaker story flow. Can be fun to read though if someones has not read other stories of Anna. If even one story is read, this must be skipped.
Both issues with part one has continued in this one too. There was pretty weak characterization and there were too many spelling mistakes. But compared to first, this part was somewhat weaker in overall story as well.
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- 20
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- 22
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- #553,378
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- 2.8
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- 7