Little_Whittles

It is not a bad story, but it could have been better.

Synopsis if you want it:
It starts off with Derek in heat and Stiles finding him, Derek asks him to chain him to the wall so he won't hurt anyone, which Stiles does. But then Stiles in his infinite wisdom and teenage boy attraction decides to give Derek a "helping hand" and relieve some tension for him. So that's where the dub-con tag comes in and it is very light. From there, there is the exploration of feelings on both sides on whether the feelings are real or mutual or if it was just the heat that sparked the attraction so to speak.

There is a bit of an action plot, but primarily focused on the relationship. It is very porny, but with a few chapters of the feels. On the IC level (on a scale from 1 to 10) this portrayal of Derek and Stiles is about a 5 or 6. They are recognizable, but a bunch of liberties taken.

Biggest issue in the story: the use of "yanno", I don't want to be too mean about it, because I am not sure if English is this author's first language and they may think "yanno" is a slang that we use a lot. But to clarify it is not and when characters end every other sentence with "yanno" it makes them sound like uneducated idiots, you know. See the misspelt slang repeatedly pop up, was by far the biggest annoyance of this fan fiction.

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